Kia Ora guys. Abdi here from Room 25! Today I've made a DLO about Sir Edmund Hillary and my opinion about if he deserves more fame than the other explorers. Enjoy
Kia ora Abdi! Ka pai finishing off this work from class. I really like that you have included an explanation above the Renderforest. This improves the quality of your blog post! I especially like that you have explained what else Sir Edmund Hillary did to give back to society. Next time you could try add some labels to your blog post. Keep up the awesome blogging! NJ
Kia ora Abdi!
ReplyDeleteKa pai finishing off this work from class. I really like that you have included an explanation above the Renderforest. This improves the quality of your blog post! I especially like that you have explained what else Sir Edmund Hillary did to give back to society. Next time you could try add some labels to your blog post.
Keep up the awesome blogging!
NJ